题例二:
假如你叫刘海,下面表格是你的有关信息,请根据该表格中的信息写一篇短文。
要求:1.把表格中所示的内容表达完整。
2.用第一人称写。
3.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范、清晰,标点符号正确。
4.字数80左右。
Name |
Liu Hai |
Age |
14 |
School |
No. 1 Middle School in Beijing. |
Class |
-(2) |
Father |
Chinese teacher |
School |
No. 1 Middle School in Beijing. |
Mother |
English teacher |
School |
No. 2 Middle School in Beijing. |
Brother |
Liu Jun |
Age |
12 |
Have a black cat. Its name is Mimi. |
写作指导 :
此题是一篇介绍人物的文章,有关人物的信息不是以语言形式,而是以表格形式出现的。写作之前首先必须细致地分析表格所提供的信息,明确应写哪几个方面的内容,安排好写作的顺序,做到主次分明。表格内说明了“我”、“父亲”、“母亲”、“弟弟”及“猫”等几个方面的情况,写作时便可按此顺序依次说明。在说明每个人的情况时应将表格中所提供的内容全部反映出来,尽量不增添无关内容,但可适量增加诸如对弟弟的评价,对小猫的态度等方面的词句,一方面使内容更加充实,另一方面也可减少字数不够的担心。
参考范文:
My name is Liu Hai.I'm fourteen.I'm in No.1Middle School in Beijing.I'm in Class Two,Grade One.My father is a Chinese teacher.He works in my school.My mother is a teacher,too.She teaches English,but she is in No.2Middle School in Beijing.I have a brother.His name is Liu Jun.He is twelve.He's a good boy.I have a cat at home.It's black.Its name is Mimi.It looks very nice.I like my cat very much.
(89 words)