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根据中文意思和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑的英文文段。所给的英文提示词语必须都用上，句数不限；中文提示内容不必逐句翻译。（12分）
提示：
一个雨天，李莉乘出租车回家。在车里她发现司机在学英语。他对李莉说了些什么？此事对你学习英语有何启发？为支持北京“申奥”你打算做些什么？
①one rainy day，go home，by taxi
②in the car，find，was learning English
③said to Li Li，I，week，English，when，at school，now，work hard，to help with Beijing's Olympic bid（申奥）
④I think．．．，to show support（n．支持）for the bid for the Beijing 2008 Olympic Games
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（2001年北京西城区）
考生作文：
One rainy day，Li Li went home by taxi．In the car，she found the taxi driver was learning English．He said to Li Li，“I was weak at English when I was at
失分点①
school．Now I'm working hard in the car．I wanted to help with Beijing's Olympic
失分点② 失分点③
bid．”I think I must study from the taxi driver．I'm a student．I should study hard
失分点④
now．English is very use ．I've helped my parents to learn English．We can show
失分点⑤
support for the bid for the Beijing 2008 Olympic Games．I wish Beijing can win！
失分点⑥
①be weak in“在某方面弱”属于固定搭配。
②working hard后应加at it文章表达意思才清楚。
③wanted应改为want，表达一个意愿用一般现在时。
④study应改为learn from，“向某人学习”是固定搭配。
⑤ues应改为useful，此处需要形容词。
⑥can改为will在这里恰当些。 （西城区一考生）
简评：
该考生能按照文章的要求和提示，写出的文章表达较清楚，语意连贯，行文自然，但文中有语言错误，出现了6个失分点，该文章得分为9分。
参考范文：
One rainy day，Li Li went home by taxi．In the car she found（that）the driver was learning English．He said to Li Li，“I was weak in English when I was at school．Now I'm working hard at it to help with Beijing's Olympic bid．”I think I should learn from the driver．English is very important for us because it is widely used for business all over the world．As a student，I'll do my best to learn English well at school．And I'm going to teach Mum English to show support for the bid for the Beijing 2008 Olympic Games．
